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FotoFriday XXIX by ~knotbox:iconknotbox:



Its one of those days. Its one of those days where the sky is nice. The sky isn't beautiful or depressing. Its just, nice.

Its kinda like an in between day. Where you can do anything and it would be awesome. Its a day where you wish it were Saturday, but your glad its not Monday. Its feels like a Thursday, but it could be Tuesday or Sunday.

Its a day where breathing is special. Where the earth smells strong of a good earthy smell no matter where you go, and a steady wind is blowing. When you think about it, days like this come before rain.

Its almost like these days are a savior. Its a day almost like a holiday with no real celebration. Its a special day, but you don't really know why. You just know. You can feel it.

On days like this, you feel on top of a hill watching the sun set all day, and the wind blow through a light sweater. You feel warm, and comfortably cold. You feel young and wise.

I remember things on days like this. I smell my childhood on days like this. I'm in an other world on days like this.

Days like this are timeless.
©2007-2008 ~knotbox
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My Title: Timeless

In participating in FotoFriday XXIX I wrote this. I wrote in straight through after seeing this weeks theme photo. Which is Childhood by =gapgirl

Critique encouraged, but please don't insult the piece. I haven't written fiction pur in awhile.

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~Fleurnoire:iconFleurnoire: Mar 30, 2007, 3:17:15 PM
I love the list of weekdays - it's amazing to just have a day that sits so out of time and all by itself that you can't remember what day it's supposed to be, because it's just a day that is.

I like!

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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." ~Oscar Wilde

"I love acting. It is so much more real than life."
~Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray, 1891
~knotbox:iconknotbox: Mar 30, 2007, 3:27:48 PM
Its probably Wednesday.

Thanks! No critique?

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YES, WE HAVE NO DESTINY.
ONLY THOSE SWALLOWED UP BY
IGNORANCE AND FEAR
WHO TAKE FALSE STEPS,
SHALL PLUNGE US INTO
THE MUDDY WATERS
CALLED "DESTINY"
!Coffee-Rules:iconCoffee-Rules: Mar 30, 2007, 5:54:24 PM
Days like this are timeless...
This was a great narrative! It was very perceptive! I could see and feel everything you described. :+fav:!

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~knotbox:iconknotbox: Mar 30, 2007, 6:02:23 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you thought so. :D

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YES, WE HAVE NO DESTINY.
ONLY THOSE SWALLOWED UP BY
IGNORANCE AND FEAR
WHO TAKE FALSE STEPS,
SHALL PLUNGE US INTO
THE MUDDY WATERS
CALLED "DESTINY"
!Coffee-Rules:iconCoffee-Rules: Mar 30, 2007, 6:41:56 PM
:clap:

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=gapgirl:icongapgirl: Mar 31, 2007, 8:41:06 AM Mood: Love
omg :omg:

it's just amazing :love: .. :+fav: for sure

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Join us at the Emirates
:heart: =gapystock
~knotbox:iconknotbox: Mar 31, 2007, 8:53:06 AM
ohgosh, Thank you :floating:

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YES, WE HAVE NO DESTINY.
ONLY THOSE SWALLOWED UP BY
IGNORANCE AND FEAR
WHO TAKE FALSE STEPS,
SHALL PLUNGE US INTO
THE MUDDY WATERS
CALLED "DESTINY"
~Fleurnoire:iconFleurnoire: Mar 31, 2007, 11:49:11 AM
Oh. Oops. :D

Some of the sentences are a little too choppy. Smooth out the connecting sentences in each paragraph, and edit your punctuation. Some of the commas get a little screwy.

There you go!

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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." ~Oscar Wilde

"I love acting. It is so much more real than life."
~Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray, 1891
~knotbox:iconknotbox: Mar 31, 2007, 12:48:19 PM
yay thanks. Your the first person, any more specific punches? So I have an idea where to start?

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YES, WE HAVE NO DESTINY.
ONLY THOSE SWALLOWED UP BY
IGNORANCE AND FEAR
WHO TAKE FALSE STEPS,
SHALL PLUNGE US INTO
THE MUDDY WATERS
CALLED "DESTINY"